DONE!

I am done with the commenting about the story and I sure hope
you read it. Wasn't it exciting? LOL!

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Basic Overview

There are two girls who have been playing tennis together every Saturday morning. When they come back two the house one girl goes to her mom's room to get money that her impatient friend demanded. The girls brother cut his finger and while he was looking for help he stumbles upon his sisters friend. The brother knows who the girls sister is and basically shares his dislikes about her. Ending the story with a very long conversation.

Story Questions

Setting ??
1.  Where is this story set?
On a Saturday morning at the east side tennis courts.
2.  In what time (historical context) is it set?
I think it is set in the fifties.
3.  How do you know the answers to the two previous questions?
Using context clues.

Character ??s

1.  Who is the main character?
The main characters are Selena and Ginnie.    
2.  Who is/ are ancillary characters?
Eric
3.  What is the main character's major physical trait?
What is the main characters psychological traits?
They are both young athletic girls who bicker a lot.
8.  Who is important to the main character?
No one really except the other girl. 
9.  Who is the main character important to?
They are obviously important to each other
and their parents.
10.  What is the main character's biggest flaw?
Their biggest flaws are probably their
argumentative attitudes.
11.  What does the main character do?  For work?  For fun?
They are both students who love to play tennis.
In the story they play tennis.

Plot ??s
1.  Where does this story begin?
The story begins at one of the girls' homes.
2.  Where does this story end?
It ends with a conversation with one of the girls'
older brother in the living room.
3.  What is the conflict of this story? Is there more than one?
Who pays the cab fare. The brother dislikes her sister.
4.  What is the climax of this story?
The climax is when Eric walks in while his hand was
bleeding
5.  How would you describe the structure of this plot line? 
Is it linear (in-time, chronological) or circular 
(like “Pulp Fiction” or “Lost Highway”)?
It is hard to tell because the story is only one day. However,
I am pretty sure that it is in chronological order.

General Criticism 2

I have finished reading general criticism two and it was very interesting. I basically proves that he didn't know squat about Zen. Having said this he attempted to interpret Zen principles and ideas in his story. Resulting in a very horrible use of the idea of Zen. Also, all his so called "Zen" ideas in this story are false, mixed up, made up on a whim, or plainly untrue.

The story is about a group of people that are having a conversation. The main characters are Ginnie Mannox, Selena Graff, and Miss Basehoar's.Ginni is more of a mean and rich girl. I don't have time to explain peace out! "That makes a dollar ninety you owe me,"

I have finished reading the story

It is basically about two girls who play tennis everyday. One of the girls brother meets the other girl and realizes he knows her snobby sister. Then the two go off on a huge tangent.